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Secret Snowflake By Me for Zeckro

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So this story starts in a nice cozy yet small building on xmas eve (i suck with quiet characters so im apologizing now)
Atramon: (I want to get Marco a present but I don't know what he wants and wont ask the other's nope never)
Marco: hey what are you doing Altramon?
Atramon:...not thinking of getting you a present yep not that that's for sure (I was so smooth with that he has no clue)
Marco: (a present i knew he wasn't that bright but he told me it flat out I guess I'll be nice and play along)

So Atramon attempted to make and find a few gifts for his partner but kept failing and getting caught by Marco...so that's were the crazy hyperactive partially insane Wyvernmon comes into the story.
Wyvernmon: Hey Atramon why are you trying so hard to get Marco a gift without trying to figure out what he wants?
Atramon:...it isn't your concern..(what's wrong with this guy? why's he bugging me)
Wyvernmon: Hey Atramon be nicer let me help you find him a gift I bet I know what he wants.
after an awkward long pause...Atramon finally responds
Atramon:...*sigh*...ok help he doesn't know what im doing I think.....
Wyvernmon: YAY!!!! let's ask the others!!!!!!
Atramon:....(he's to hyper for me......)

So the both of them start walking around asking the others what they think Marco may want...but unfortenutly nearly no one knows anything about Marco...then they lucked out and somehow Isacc knew something useful
Isacc: so Atramon you say you have no clue what to get right?
Atramon:.....yeah no clue..
Isacc: well we know he loves correcting everyone and really loves his mom soo let's try making cookies or something like that for him.
Atramon:...(did he say cookies?)..what are cookies food?
Wyvernmon: Yeah they are Isacc gave me some before they were really yummy but can we even make some?

Isacc: Yeah I found a bush with really delicious berry's on it so we can use those but i need to stay here to mix things for them to be made so grab the berries for me..

So Atramon and Wyvernmon go grab the berries and while they are gone Marco decides to finally ask Isacc what him and Atramon were trying to do...
Marco: Hey you Isacc what is Atramon doing why's he trying to get me a present so bad?
Isacc: *sigh* he's making you cookies he seems to think you didn't realize his plan but I doubted it but his reason is great he thinks your the best partner ever and thinks he has to pay you back no matter what.

after hearing what Isacc said Marco decided to pretend to act as surprised as possible.
After around an hour and a half Atramon and Isacc finished the cookies...
Atramon:ok let's give it to him now now now..
Isacc: we have to wait until tomorrow to make it as exciting as possible so try hiding them.

So finally the next day comes and Atramon starts showing Marco his present.
Atramon:...i hope you like it
with that Marco opens the present to reveal the cookies
Marco: hmm cookies? (wait these don't look like normal cookies why am I so drawn to eating these?)
Then Marco takes a bite of one of the cookies which caused him to have the worlds largest grin on his face.
Marco:t-t-these are the greatest cookies I have ever Tried it's like a mothers cooking Thank you...
and with that both Marco and Atramon became alot closer and and Marco learned that he should pretend he doesn't know what Atramon is doing more often.
So I am not at all confidant in my drawing ability so I decided to write a story for this at any rate I'm sorry if no one is in character also I'm sorry if I really didn't make the greatest story....and criticism go!!!!!

Isacc and Wyvernmon by me
Marco and Altramon by Zeckro
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OMFG I LOVE IT :iconsupertighthugplz: u brought out Atramon's personality brillianty and i died laughing at the part when you wrote "nobody knows anything about Marco". (hints that i should stop procrastinating on my events) but great job man!!!